When I've unraveled every yarn
and stunned the voices silent;
when I can take my place
in the kitchen or as queen;
When I own all my deeds
and every word that I have spoken,
I'll be birdsong
with the cage
wide open.
When I can choose direction
or crush the compass in my fist.
When I can vandalize the garden
in honor of my sister Eves
and finally hold an apple
with its skin unbroken,
I'll be birdsong
with the cage
wide open.
A bit of a nod to Miss Maya for Shay's word list prompt at Real Toads
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- Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days. ---Flannery O'Connor
13 comments:
I love this, Kelli.
Yeah! I love that chorus - this is like the thinking woman's response to Kipling's 'If'.
I read this over and over, feeling the meaning and power. Another strong write asserting a strong woman.
I love this affirmation!
I love this song of freedom, power, and confidence.
A song of liberation and strength...I love the repetition in this...a truly amazing poem!!
beautifully done!
Beautiful
I love the allusions to Maya- phenomenal woman here, too.
I'm so glad you chose to repeat the birdsong part!! Powerful write MZ and I love the concept of actually BEING the birdsong. :)
Everything about this is in harmony, balanced, and whole, even the sense of longing and imperfection--not sure how you did that, but it certainly worked.
This is wonderful! I love the message of caring and freedom and solidarity.
The refrain is gorgeous, and those first two lines...!!!
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