The smoke cleared quick,
and the truth of the trick was revealed;
the rabbit in your hand
sawed in half
with a blade and bath
much like me.
For Kerry's prompt at Real Toads
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12 comments:
Perfect combination of title card and the horrifying scene that follows. Really no dialogue is needed to create the impact!
ouch!!
you wield brevity like a scalpel ~
Yikes! No magic there, just power. Melodrama delights in such evil, but only if there is a rescuer in the end.
Okay it's horrifying, but I feel like this time you didn't tell enough. Why "like me"? Maybe I'm dense.
Profound in its simplicity...
An excellent use of the title card.
… the rabbit trick went … bad? Just like he broke her heart? I'm with Fireblossom - I need a tad more, unless I "got it"…
Perfect pairing for the card you chose!
I'm lost. But gasping.
that's awful but I'm sure you gave exactly what was required, yuk
Yikes. But the meek shall inherit the earth! k.
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