a bare branch trembling
a north wind leaf shuffling ache
under the weather
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Monday, October 26, 2015
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- Maude Lynn
- Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days. ---Flannery O'Connor
11 comments:
Yep, that's Portland today --- are you sure you're not here!!! Hope your week is off to a great start!! Have fun!!
Perfect. Haiku is easy to screw up, but this lands perfectly, like a leaf off a tree.
I often feel that ache, though here it is a mild 58 degrees and I went out to take photos of leaves still on the trees. Powerful writing. Have a great day.
Nice play on words in your last line.
Makes me think of my left knee--every year older, it gets better at predicting the weather!
I can see the trembling branch and the leaf clinging to it, about to be blown away on a chill breeze.
Actually, I love the fall. But it's best when one has a nice warm home to go to where the falling leaves can be viewed through a window as they blow about!
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a bare branch trembles
practicing non-attachment
falls on zen master
super... :-)
do find mine here:
http://drishti.co/2015/10/25/deliberation/
A perfect haiku with a unique metaphor
Great haiku! Excellent metaphor to end.
Such beauty in few words.
A gray fall day then....Nicely done.
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