If I must
be on my belly
eating dust
I'll be a snake.
Linked to Poetry Pantry at Poets United
Saturday, November 3, 2018
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- Maude Lynn
- Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days. ---Flannery O'Connor
12 comments:
I love this --- especially since the title (and closing word) doubles as "snack."
Yes, it seems perfect!
Perfect!
Everything in this poem hinges on that opening word: IF.
Maybe you have no choice... you become snake when your're forced to crawl.
Perfect!❤️
Nice way to shape shift a fall into an adventure.
well, a snake has the ability to shed it's skin a chance to regenerate...
Ha ha, good choice!
Me too
Sounds very reasonable to me!
Let it be . . .
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