Pack.
I want to be pack
led by a raven's spiral.
Running down rabbits, moon drunk.
Moon blessed. A moon choir.
Pack.
Fur freeze thick.
Teeth bared
at bare-limbed winter.
Pack.
I want to be pack.
I've already been
pride and murder.
For The Tuesday Platform at Real Toads
Tuesday, February 16, 2016
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- Maude Lynn
- Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days. ---Flannery O'Connor
14 comments:
Oh you are the clever one. I love this.
There are times I feel most content to be part of a pack.
What a delicious menagerie!
Pack is so much better than murder... but I could go for skein myself..
This is wizardly! Love "moon drunk. Moon blessed. A moon choir". And having already been pride and murder. Yes, very clever!
Ah, a clever one you are indeed, MZ!! I do love this one -- of course I tell you that every day, but I do mean it -- every day!!
Nice three-pack of verses, MZee. Our county commissioners have decreed there will be no PACKing of heat at our Houston rodeo. "Guns don't belong in the family atmosphere."
BT W, I think I heard on the news that the fellow who shot the little boy by mistake in a fit of road rage has been apprehended.
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Many the careers of those who careen with the wolves!
The phrases "raven's spiral" and "moon drunk" are especially delightful.
BE the pack, the whole pack!
Amazingly creative!
I love the hunger and eagerness..like a full moon in full glorious flight
I want to join your pack and hunt with you! Lol!
a pack of moons tonight, it seems ~
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