Behind me there's an old man
with meat in a can and food stamps.
He's a veteran of Korea and Vietnam.
He trembles dimes for cigarettes.
For all he gave, this is what he gets?
I said, "Sir, I'll get the rest.
That is, if you don't mind.
Let me pay for yours;
You've already paid for mine."
Beside me there's a woman my age,
magazine in hand.
Her eyes are on the page, but her mind is burning.
She's got a girl in Navy blue,
she tells me, and her pride shines through,
but there's worry;
"I'm terrified all the time.
When you pray for yours,
don't forget to pray for mine."
A song for Shay at Real Toads. The first half of the poem is mostly true. I didn't actually tell the gentleman that I had paid for his groceries. I was afraid that I would offend him or that he would refuse.
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- Maude Lynn
- Anybody who has survived his childhood has enough information about life to last him the rest of his days. ---Flannery O'Connor
17 comments:
Knowing your past life as a rock star, it comes as no surprise that you can deliver meaningful lyrics, in a song that holds true for any age. Poignant.
Surprising subtle and a profound nudge there. Great, great as always. Put it to music, kid.
A song of giving and gratitude is one we all need to sing more often.
Fantastic - the poem, the story, and the real life event. I especially love, "you already paid for mine."
A poem/song for all time .. yet it feels fresh and brand new.
I would love for these lyrics to be longer... Beautiful theme and lovely write!
And you told it right, some of our military really got the ...
I won't complain for myself because out of five years I did not get shot at and I received an electronics education, a skill, a good job, and a GI Bill where I could finish my education.
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The overall rhythm is wonderful and message-of course--and the trembling of the dimes--agh--very vivid and distilled, as always--and important message. K. Manicddaily
I agree with Hedgewitch. We certainly need to sing more about giving and gratitude without judgment.
Never, ever, ever be afraid to do good. Great poem! (give, and it shall be given unto you...~Jesus)
And pass the good stuff on. Big seal clap! (You know what I mean, from our convo!)
Sensitive rendering. Wonderful message.
You should find a larger home for this poem. Look into a magazine or newspaper or anthology about veterans/the military.
It's full of heart. Gorgeous.
It really hits home! Beautifully told.
Yes, I will notice
Yes, I will pray
You are my new folk hero.
Oh that second stanza -- Wow!
beautiful, MZ. ~
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