In the pause
after the asking,
kiss ellipses .
.
.
down my neck,
and I'll say yes.
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Sunday, July 1, 2012
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18 comments:
Would anyone be fool enough not to, with an invitation like that?
Sweet and sexy, Kel.
well...if you insist. ;-)
One word: HOT!
In 15 words, smokin'. You and Shay are both on fire tonight.
(Not to mention that is my favorite form of punctuation...)
Sometimes it is that simple, because there is nothing you wouldn't do for the one who loves you.
superbly done!
oo la la...nice
How could I refuse?
Delectable as ever!
Ahh - just gorgeous. Yes, it's the spaces between that hold the most.
Happy Fourth of July, Mama Zen!
Oooo..how could you say no? :)
What Mary said:)
Elipses are my favorite punctuation too. That which is left unsaid is so much more eloquent than that which is given voice, or
That which is left unsaid...
See what I mean?
I agree with Talon--you get all the anticipation between the first ellipse and the last...extra good that way.
This is very cool. The subtle projection of the ellipses from kiss to neck is really nicely done.
Oh so clever. :)
For what it's worth, I "read" each ellipsis with a loud tongue click.
O how sweet and sensual enhanced by gorgeous alliteration!
Short and sexy....lovely piece
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